Supernatural Detour
Wow, good work not giving away the ending...I made it all the way to "the children were all around the bed."
Then it worked. It kept you on the hook. I love those kinds of stories or poetry. I play around with that style often.
Wow, good work not giving away the ending...I made it all the way to "the children were all around the bed."
Then it worked. It kept you on the hook. I love those kinds of stories or poetry. I play around with that style often.